It's bittersweet the love and sadness at war. Good job

Oh my goodness this is so sad, I can feel past heart breaks beating on me and coming back to the surface as I read this, remarkable job at the emotion you put into the poem and you poured your feelings out beautifully, two thumbs up!

Wond

Wonderfully written! Lovely and soft at the beginning and then bitter at the end... Just how Love is