Sad but very beautiful. I like this poem.
5/5

Thanks Kirs :)

I love this poem.
But it very sad poem.
I hope death isn't that close to you. :)

It isn't Omar, just pent up emotions :)

I love the way you make the literature devices have feeling and emotion....its used subtle and only recognized after.
Its a poem one can relate to and the very thoughts at times seem like de-ja-vu
Very good Work Hal :) keep it up! :)