by Beautiful Chaos Jul 22, 2012
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
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Only hurts when I think |
by Colm
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For some reason, reading this poem reminded me of the film 'Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind.' Its an interesting poem, not wanting to think, wanting to bury your past. I liked the reference to a stone on the mountain of humanity: it was a good novel way to describe how each individual is a small piece of the collective. The puntuation could be revised in the poem in places I felt though, it read a little choppy in some places the way I was reading it. Overall a decent and interesting piece! |