Why can I never sleep?..

Yes, it makes much more sense except for one thing: you forgot to capitalize the 'i' :x

I'm sorry! I just have a problem with lowercased i's...

Hello =]

I have decided to comment on this one because there are a couple mistakes, and because I like the message, or at least the one that I got from reading it :)

Typos: 'of' in the second line is supposed to be 'off,' and the 'he' in the fourth would make me more sense if it was 'be.' I am also confused with the first line...I don't know what you are trying to say here. Are you trying to say that you keep certain thoughts? If that is so, then you might want to change the wording...

The message in this story is so true. I have often found that I remember the bad memories a lot more than the good, which is really sad because I sometimes tend to think that my whole life has been bad when it truth it has not (man, what a long sentence!). Life can be a bugger sometimes.

Overall, I like this poem. I just think it needs a little work, and it will be in tip-top shape :]

Excellent
5/5

"So many things I am or have fought
Oh life...why have you erased the thoughts I want, and kept the ones I hate...."

This one struck me to heart I ask myself why this everyday

Great write!