Him..</3

by Summer Skye   Aug 11, 2012


"If He Was So Good He Wouldn't Be My Ex,
If He Was So Good He Wouldn't Break My Heart With Every Word He Speaks,
If He Was So Great I Wouldn't Be Were I Am Now,
I Was Given The Chance To Try And Love Again Instead Of Being Stuck In The Depths Of Hell,
I Was Given The Chance To Start Over With Someone New.....
All You Have To Do Is Give Me Time.."

~Summer-Skye~

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  • 11 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I must say, the content in this piece is amazing. You start by acknowledging that he is your past now, that the things you did or felt are way gone. Loved how you end it with saying you now have the chance to start all over with someone else, that's great, its good to know you will get over the guy, all it takes is time but eventually, you will get over him...

    I would suggest you not capitalize every first letter coz that makes it annoying to read..lol..and maybe some commas here and there will help but otherwise, saw nothing wrong with this.

    • 11 years ago

      by Summer Skye

      Yes im havin issues getting over him but ill do it im sure, but uhm... im horribly sorry about that for some reason i have to its like.... gotta do it xD

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