by Mattias Ostling Aug 14, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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You are the birds in the sky |
by Xanthe
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Lovely collab, you both. I don't even know who wrote what, which is quite hard to do when writing collaboratively. The transition of the narration and the flow is incredibly smooth. Really well done! |
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Amazing job Mathias I am a big fan of yours |
by Thomas
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Very good write guys! |
by Chelsey
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You guys I actually really quite enjoyed readingt this. Loved that it was about mythology, yet it didn't bore me, the love was felt and the words really captivated me. You guys did amazing with this piece, I love it!! |