Peter you win, hands down, to come up with such a complex piece in such a short space of time is testament to you writing skills. This is why they call you the red hot rhymer. Very touching.

Dear Peter,

You had me in tears with this poem:)

You crafted this with so much care and it was not until I read this, that I realized how good a friend I have found in you.

Only thing that is that I am not really a quiet person, ha ha. But you were not to know. If we ever do have that coffee, you will find that out.

Thank you so very much, you won the challenge and will have the kiss when we meet for coffee:)

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

Aww peter this is a brilliant piece and so spot on! Ingrid your a beautiful person, inside and out :)
Well done peter, and well done for being the perfect muse :)

5/5

Aww peter this is a brilliant piece and so spot on! Ingrid your a beautiful person, inside and out :)
Well done peter, and well done for being the perfect muse :)

5/5

Wonderful poem pete... U won many hearts with this.. (i mean darren and rebecca;))
I always like poems as dedication... :)
this one is just beautiful... :))

Wonderful poem pete... U won many hearts with this.. (i mean darren and rebecca;))
I always like poems as dedication... :)
this one is just beautiful... :))

Very Nice Peter!!!

This poem is really lovely, genuine and kind. At some parts I almost found it quite cute and romantic in a way but its intertwined with what I believe is a very loving strong friendship.

You share a love for ingrid of true friendship!
I loved the description everything so was perfectly put together, amazing work Peter :)

I really loved the rhythem this poem had. Each line seemed to flow right into the next. And even though you weren't overly descriptive, I could really picture the scene. 5/5

One day perhaps, if you're ever free
I'll take you to lunch. just you and just me
To just get away from 'those people' around
Whose dark Hearts so cold, where jealousy abounds
To whisk you away for one moment in time
Where you can relax and yourself, unwind
Cos just like a Flower that blooms after rain
I so want to see you, happy, again..

^^^

And so we did and what a lovely lunch that was, my dear friend!!!!!

You've portrayed a very dear P & Q friend of mine so beautifully. Indeed she is every word you said. About the write, it's awesome and enjoyable. Look forward to reading more of your writes.

Peter
This was easy to comment on, not least because it has a wonderful rhyme scheme and lovely content but because Ingrid truly is one of the nicest people I've met on this site.
Well done,
Ben

Hello Peter,

Ben is completely right. Ingrid is a treasure of this site and certainly deserves a personal tribute like this.

Now you have taken her to lunch. Maybe I could take her out, to a museum, or for a nice stroll?

Take care,

Michael

Im inly going to echo the other comments and that is to say this is a beautiful write for a wonderful lady :)

Great job :)

Peter this was beautifully and eloquently written about a beautiful and elegant lady.
never has anything bad to say about anyone and is always possitive and encouraging.
Well done
Grant

What a beautiful tribute and well written as always

What a sweet piece for a beautiful person. Ingrid is indeed a special lady and she deserves such a beautiful dedication. She has an open heart, welcoming to every new person, reads each poem with heart, comments honestly, always encouraging others. Great poem and much appreciated.