Very nice Ray. A sentiment often expressed and felt, if you could only stay. Well written, song like quality.

This is great, long but because of the flow and the sentiment it's pace is spot on.
Clever write with some great analogies, love the upside down chairs.
Well done, nominated.

Reading this brought sentimental images to my
mind..its soft, tender and very heartfelt..another lovely write to read :)

Love it!!

Such a lovely poem

Okay. I've officially had my crying session for the day