Comments : If you could only stay

  • 11 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very nice Ray. A sentiment often expressed and felt, if you could only stay. Well written, song like quality.

    • 11 years ago

      by Ray Blue

      Thanks you, Sylvia!!!

      (hugs!)

      Take care,
      Ray

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    This is great, long but because of the flow and the sentiment it's pace is spot on.
    Clever write with some great analogies, love the upside down chairs.
    Well done, nominated.

    • 11 years ago

      by Ray Blue

      Darren,

      Very appreciate your nice comment!

      Thank you!

      Best,
      Ray

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Reading this brought sentimental images to my
    mind..its soft, tender and very heartfelt..another lovely write to read :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Chrissy

    Love it!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Such a lovely poem

  • 7 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Okay. I've officially had my crying session for the day