She is the One....

by Lost Soul   Sep 24, 2012


She is the one I long for,
she always turns me on.
She is my favorite record,
played till the break of dawn.

She is the one I dream of,
on the nights she's not
around. She tells me
I'm her king, I tell her
she's my crown.

She is the one I think of,
every minute of every day.
She's like a burning sunset,
that can never fade away.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Andrew Packard

    Yeah, I can relate to this, out loud
    ~Andrew

  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Love this!

    I gotta agree with syrup on this your rhymes flow off the tongue on this piece and i like how you used the burning sun towards the end comparing a love one to something i. Nature is always a great way of expressing your feelings towards them :-)

    Great job dude!

  • 13 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!! the flow and rhythm of this piece is just awesome!!

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