This is a very sad piece,full of emotions n anger..i know it hurts,a lot,when the one u love n trust the most deceive u...people may not realize,but when love turns hatred,thats very dangerous..
Take care dear..stay strong.

This is a very sad piece,full of emotions n anger..i know it hurts,a lot,when the one u love n trust the most deceive u...people may not realize,but when love turns hatred,thats very dangerous..
Take care dear..stay strong.

A friend restores hope, not sorrow. Within every scar, healing dwells.

I like these verses a lot because of its depth. Every word has a meaning and is able to stir the emotions so well.
You are a good writer and never give up writing.

Those who play wiht fire are always burned so therefore who ever hurt you so will be crisped....so sad and fillled with anger

Power. I think that's a good word to discribe it. Anger in the sorrow of it. Definately a new favorate. 5/5 Loved It!

This is really great. I love the title name. I like how you show that he tortures you from the core.
good to know when you should stay away from someone to keep yourself from continuing to get hurt. I like your words you used to describe things. very unique

I love the metaphors and the details the're so detailed and i can feel just for a moment how you actually feel

Hey, I love this piece from you,
what I have noticed is that you can pour your emotions in the words so well, you also give enough descriptions to know what's going on in the poem, but overall the emotions speak for themselves. The tone in the poem is very good too.

5/5

Very good poem, the title reminded me of a book I once read (: 5/5

Wow! I could really see the emotion in poem! Very nice work. 5/5

I love this one, it's my favorite...I felt every word as if it were my own. Wonderful, keep it up. 5/5

I like the length of this poem, it allows for a lot of detail, a lot of description about how the narrator feels (I say the narrator, I don't know whether you are writing as yourself or as someone else). There is a lot of power and emotion in this poem (I like that, angry poems are awesome xD). Great write :)

This is a sad yet beautiful piece. You write to paint pictures in people minds and I enjoy it :)

You are AMAZING!!! I love every one of your poems xx <3

You are AMAZING!!! I love every one of your poems xx <3

Very intense. Good write/read.