Comments : Dancing in the Fire

  • 11 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    This was beautiful, it painted a picture in my mind as I read.

    "My body sways momentarily in sparks,
    to its scorching emission in blossoms,
    trapping me in a blaze of waves."

    ^^ very well written lines, I enjoy your work.

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Great poem with great emotions! I loved it. This is the best stanza for me:
    "Your abstract flair beguiled my charm,
    craving for a fiesta on the canvas,
    embedded with your fiery memories. "
    I think "honouring" should be "honoring" if I'm not mistaken. Well penned piece.

  • 11 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    My body sways momentarily in sparks,
    to its scorching emission in blossoms,
    trapping me in a blaze of waves...

    This poem had me glued from beginning to the end. This stanza really stood out for me. The emotions, how you express them, its all wonderful