Last Glimpse Of Life

by Hope Vanity Chambers   Oct 13, 2012


There I lay,the cool winds soothing my burning skin.
Letting the freezing raindrops extinguish my fiery eyes.
As I watch the ink blot clouds produce a metalic glow,
around those deppresing stars of yours.
Booming thunder fills my ears,the rain becomes faster
it's like little bullets hitting your skin not
painful but perhaps enjoyable.
I throw a rock into the soggy garden seeing how well it had soaked the water.
It was as if the sky was imitating the color of the devil's eyes.
Dark and bold,so interesting.Grabbing my sketch book and start to paint the sky.
Stroke by stroke the sky gets darker,a perfect replica of the sky,
a memort I shall cherish forever.
All of a sudden darkness takes over my eyes.
I dont fight it because i know its time I just let it engulf me.
The last thing I saw was a the matte finish of the sky
and a glimpse of thunder.......

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  • 10 years ago

    by Marky

    I wish I could write like that when I was your age. You have potential. Great job, top marks.

  • 11 years ago

    by CarnivorousCoffin

    This poem is amazing, please write more? I'm hooked. You have great talent. 5/5 for sure.

    • 11 years ago

      by Hope Vanity Chambers

      Omg thank u thank u thank.uuuuuuuu so much im definently gonna publish more can u spread the word please¿

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