DELETE THIS AND I WILL COME TO SYRIA AND CHOP ALL YOUR GORGEOUS HAIR OFF

Noura, your rambling doesn't sound like rambling you know.

I love the Spanish part.. I see you are using bits of it. Pretty cool. I speak Spanish and I can't write poems in Spanish lol.

And I agree with Yaki here... Don't delete it.

Haha, I swear I imagined Yaki doing what she said she will.

Why delete this, sugar?

It's so beautiful, so original, so well-built. And that was a stunning turn in the end.

Keep Writing like this,,, you just drown me everytime mwah

Nour...If I could take this and comment on everything I would but its.not possible...
It was utterly...is....utterly amazing...and obv if u wanna delete it...its your choice but I love the emotion...it just adds to you...its powerful and Im using too many..............'s (I forgotten there name) but I'm speechless and not just because I'm a complete wreck...it is just amazing.

I agree wid tara, utterly amazing.

Splendid, in ever way and every aspect. eveyrthing about this poem is awesome and outstanding. from word choice to emotions, ths is just one of the best poems ...the expressions SO special..a winner in my book.

a poetess, indeed

Wow.. good one my favorite lines are

My poetry had only spoken of your eyes
since then, they were beautiful. Sad
but beautiful.
Too beautiful to morph into a piece
of art, even though I was a Bohemian
painter by that time.

very beautiful and real words.. but again it is a sad poem well written