This reminds me so much of your older style. Elegantly melancholic, eloquently raw. Missed it. ;)

A beautiful, well formed delicate piece. Love it keep writing

This is so sad Myryn!! Lovely piece though. I shall come again, at least to reread it :)

<3

Great piece, Myryn!

This had the same heaviness of emotion I found
in "Scolding mothers"...

it is so beautiful, and so profound and so
intruiging it does not leave room for someone
to comment on it..

they are some pieces, who leave no freedom for the reader to create their own way of feeling the piece.

these are the selfish pieces, those where the writer has you in the palm of their hands.
feeling exactly like them. its like their words creep on you, and try to make a home on your skin. these.. these are the poems worth reading. worth coming back to.

the selfish poems,
those who the writer wrote for themselves and not the public.

What a knockout myryn,
what a knockout...