What stands out here is the imagery, it is vivid in parts yet still mysterious and haunting, I wonder what happened in this house, some tragic incident or something darker and sinister...
and I also wonder if there is a building like this near you, or that you have seen because it feels really vivid in your mind which comes across in the details.

I really like this piece...in all it's glory it is actually a really impressive piece

Oh queenie

I loved this , the vocabulary was out standing and it
Flowed so well .

Devoid of noise, of neighbors,
and of life; here, the sun
no longer rises.

This stood out to me I loved
It , the sun no longer rises

Such a vivid image I got from this

One of your best pieces I've read

Loved it 5/5 nominated

Shivers!
That's a beautiful dark piece. It reminds me of all those horror movies about some homes.. there is a new movie starring Katniss Everdeen of the Hunger Games talking about a killer living in a weird house.... also, the last house on the left...

lol, I think you got my point. What I wanted to say is that it drew in my head a movie scene! That's flawless.

"I know some lonely house down by the riverside
where one too many lonely souls used to
reside."

no one does it like you Myryn, no one.

Myryn

I was reading your piece and thinking about Poe.Superb!

Congrats. You totally deserved it IMO :)

I love how you explored the subject of a lonely house and give the readers your perspective of it. Your vocabulary just paints a vivid picture in my mind of how the house is like. I also love how you end your poem, as your last stanza kind of breaks away from the commas and short descriptions the house; leaving one to note that behind every abandon house, there used to be a someone or some family who used to live there, especially like those houses in US & UK, where some houses has long dark history. Totally a well deserved win. Congrats Buddy

This is one of the best, descriptive writings I have come a crossed in a while...

Queen has set a picture in my head of a haunted house, with such an eerie feeling, and yet I went deeper within this piece. In my opinion it sets a tone of depressive nature and I can't help but feeling it's the way one feels when depression sets in... The major metaphor left me speechless and I adore the nature tones throughout and also the mysterious and edginess it made me experience. I've fallen in love with this piece!!
Very Nice!!

This has character !