Missionary Position

by MyHalozChokinMe   Nov 2, 2012


Your admonishment - mere monologue.
Your thoughts - humility defaced.
To defeat you seek a dialogue.
On belief - that's your mistake.

Save your faith and obedience.
The politics of myself
State my soul is not your currency.
Go preach at someone else.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Well done on passing the 100 poem milestone (or sitting on the 100 poem milestone)

    what a way to do it, this is epic.
    I just love the attitude in this whole piece, your poetry is fantastic and I love the fact it pulls no punches.

    great write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    The message is so straightforward that the irony of your title is hidden in the bushes.
    Wonderful diatribe on righteousness.
    The consistency of your wit and creativity impresses me.

    • 12 years ago

      by MyHalozChokinMe

      This might sound a little childish, but I won't apologize =)

      I have a ton of respect for you, and a comment like that from you, is really the ultimate compliment.

      Thank you Larry.

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