Wooooooooow THIS IS GREAT:)
You did ittt
Speechless..

Amazing Xanthe!!
thanks for sharing the poem dear!
You've such a gifted talent..how beautifully u have written..your way of writing n ideas used,i loved them all!
Simply the best!! *_*

I could never imagine someone using 'sickle' in a poem. It sounds biological. Here, it added a loooot of meaning, and I kind of found it perfect in its place.

Way to go, poetess :)

Amazing ending.

Breath-taking, Xanthe. Missed reading you.

You exist my dear and your dreamy poetry silences the clocks and my heart.Bravo!

I can't believe you're 15... I'm sorry. These metaphors are just bigger. Or you're a genius.
I say the second.

Re-reading this reminds me why I fell in love with you a while ago.

Uhummm. Cozy.

I'm speechless.
No words can ever describe how beautiful and perfect your writing is... you are magnificent and should be published all around the world. I truly mean that.

I have missed your writing, I'm so glad to read something new from you. :D

Xanthe, yu are an amazing writer and I absolutely adore your poems.

Xantheeeeeeee!!

It feels like forever since i commented on one of your writes...and im upset because i dont have much to say about this other than JAWDROPPING!!!

Seriously when i think your writing couldnt get better i see this just perfect....if i could id nominate in a heart beat!