Okay, you know my opinion on your poetry, I LOVE IT ALL.
I love this one too...and if I can explain why, it is more hopeful that there is a love out there for everyone, but the message I got is that for it to work, both sides need to be on the same page, they need to both have the same ideas as to what love is, what dedication is, what forever is.

My cousin and her partner have been together 14 years, they have two children, a seven year old girl and a 2 year old boy, she recently found out that he has been seeing another woman, for EIGHT YEARS!

Basically what I love about this poem, is the hope, the letter to your future love, saying treat me right, lets do this together.

just so breathtakingly strong and flawless
x

So perfectly written, love how you wrote it:)
As usual great job Chels..

"You're the first one I can say is
out of my league"

its cause i'm a woman right??

I don't know who this is about
but I'll just keep fooling myself into thinking its about me

such gorgeous tender poetry,
what has gotten into you... muahh

nominating xoxo

Can you stop being such a flirt woman

you just got out a relationship, let the P breathe a little :p

hahah what are you now, Kim K???

this year and the next are all for you ok

forget all the HE's

I am yakari and forbid this going any further ok

Shut up! I am allowed to flirt!! My God I'm on my "no dating for a yr" at least let me flirt....

He's just an adorably cute crush mmk?

Kim k

Ahahahahah f off

Damn, my phone battery has a longer duration than your heartbreaks..

....and I have a smart phone, with tons of apps.

if you know what I mean.........................
...................

*dissapears

Aww Chelsey this is cute ,

Go get him girl ;) haha

Awesome write as per its a really soft write

I love it

Amazing:') gosh I can relate to this in so many ways I can..n..nn't..eve...even type correctly because of what this piece did to my heart!!

All the flirting, the crush thing and the need for this person bring back such dear memories..

I know how hard it is to be attracted to someone who is out of your league..yet still no one can deny the pleasure and joy felt when we're crushing for someone.

I could feel how much you want him to be with you and you'll do everthing for him if he was yours. Such a beautiful piece full of emotions! another art work from you chels well done xx

Chelz Chelz Chelz... your writing just gets better and better with every new poem... this piece is just delicious, I can not choose just one stanza to say "this is my favorite" because they are all my favorite... the word play in each stanza is wonderful... I've said it before and I'll say it again, you've come a long way baby and you just keep amazing me with every new piece of art you create...

Chelsey I love how you're writing like countless poems every day! And they just are stronger than ever!!! You go :)
This was so encouraging, just the inspiration I felt you were writing for this person is uplifting. Truly beautiful and hopeful. I like how it's relatable too, yet you make it your own by making this your dream and no one elses...I've definitely done this with past crushes, thinking of being a part of their lives, and I think it's great you wrote about this. It brought happiness and that longing in my own soul to belong to someone someday in this passionate way.