When I Met You.

Thank you very much.

Aww this is such a cute poem. I like how you reuse the title throughout the poem. And the transition of who you used to be than this love struck peeper [but in a cute way... not creepy]. And the line "with this fragile heart", it seems like you're talking about yourself and you know, I really like it. It is a huge contrast to the "sex craving druggy" [not calling you a druggy... just couldn't find the right word for it]. For someone who is into those hardcore things to have a gently heart, it sets up a really sweet and gentle topic for a poem. To watch such a "hardcore" man to turn into a loving person, it's too cute. And don't get the wrong idea for cute... not the puppy-dogs-with-big-eyes cute... it is a very sweet poem though it isn't filled with all that crummy emotional stuff.