Holy....crap.....gut wrenching honesty...love love love when you go on such a tangent, let it all out. Hold back nothing, let the whole poem happen naturally....

Omggggg....if people read this and don't feel emotion then they are cold hearted. Haha seriously, this just completely frustrated me for you. Adding to my faves....sigh*.....I miss this kind of writing from you!

Yaki, oh my gosh this is just heartbreaking...Chelsey said it perfectly with the gut-wrenching honesty, because it is just that. I can see you reading this aloud and making the room silent with it. And I feel like all of us just need to do that at some point in our lives.....I get the chills just starting out reading your poem, especially with the self-destructive part. That got to me because I feel in a way we can do that to ourselves, whether in our behavior or how we think, it's easy to punish ourselves or do something despite its outcome.

This was such an incredible write and has to be read again....there's so much more emotion flowing here than maybe I can even realize, but it seriously pierces my heart. Just getting me thinking about all this confusion, analyzing the moments & love, the moments of hate. But then in the end how you repeat that it was all wrong....wow. Don't have anymore to say, just keep writing and striving as I know you will do :)

Oops im sorry i really meant to click the 5 but my compter laged and hit 4 this is amazing and has so much honest and pure love and...well not hate even tho you said as much what i got out of it was pain instead..such a pain that i hurt for you now...truly truly amazing work