Centered (Reverse Etheree)

by MyHalozChokinMe   Nov 20, 2012


Caught up in whirlwinds of thought; Emotions.
Directions reversed, compass gone mad.
My world spins faster and faster.
I have lost all my bearings.
I slowly gravitate.
Find myself centered,
Grasping for a
rock, instead
I found
you.

~The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.~

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  • 13 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nicely Done!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Oh my.....i adore this form style, i have only ever written one but i think i have to revisit this...

    As for the content....seriously you freakin wreck me, i ALWAYS LOVE your word choice and flow but the words like Whirlwind, Compass, Gravitate and Grasping gave so much emotioni and weight to what your trying to convey...and i have to say you did it masterfully.

    i love this write and i love you x

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