Comments : Serenity

  • 11 years ago

    by Blood of a Lion

    You, deserve a medal. I love the symbolism, this is like one of those rare writes that connects to everything I feel at times in certain points of life. I love it.


  • 11 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Beautiful Stephen, I like how you symbolizes us as humans as trees. In all actuality man and trees have many similarities we grow just as a tree does and take in oxygen. I love how you use such a beautiful creation to tell a love story. Well done...

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey


    Sorry, had to put the caps on so she'll see it because she'll love this!

    Stephen this was adorably beatiful. Love poems with nature twisted in them draws me right in and I can't wait to read more and more of it...

    Loved your idea with this, well written :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ohhhhhhhhhhh WOW.... just WOW... Chels is right... I LOVE THIS!

  • 11 years ago

    by The Queen

    This poem, also, is like a tree, a tree with a strong structure and desirable form. :)

    The poet titles the poem as "Serenity", a feeling of calmness or peace. Titling a poem as such, I think they only mean to convey that this is going to be an inspirational poem.

    The tree has many representations throughout the poem, but in my opinion, and as obvious as it is, it means to finally suggest that we are like the trees and as we all know, trees prevent/reduce erosion, harmful land pollutants and flooding. The forest here signifies the unknown and the evil things that knock us off the path altogether.

    The ending sums it up, peace is possible but only if we work together to achieve it. Same applies when it comes to dealing with our partners, too. Excellent piece!

    "or entangle within it's roots."
    or entangle within [its] roots.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This is so beautiful. Wow. Such a strong emotional piece and the imagery is just amazing. Glad I stumbled in to read this. Great job :] -Nik