Final Days of Fall

Haven't been reading nature pieces for a while. This makes me appreciate them again.

I love how you've cut this into smaller lines, the imagery is more impacting this way in my opinion. With so little words, this literally made me picture the last day of Fall - the sunrise, last leaves falling, birds singing, then it's Winter.

I see you've pointed the error with "sweeps sparing one." You could go to the 'Your poems' link then edit it. :)

Very nice imagery and wonderful alliteration throughout the piece!

This is really cute poem
keep writing

Correction: "sweeps sparing none"
my apologies!