I listened to that link, and that voice was really enticing.

With respect to this poem, it is totally not indecent 'category wise' as you thought.
There is this beauty(+) in how you structured your metaphors and which is unusual in your former poetry pieces. This piece is worth the front page, imo. Is there a need to dissect it? I don't think so.

I heard you saying somewhere that poetry is not emotions, if I am mistaken... but this doesn't prove it. I think you went nostalgic while listening to this song, and therefore wrote this MASTERPIECE.

I wish I have votes. But Monday isn't so far away.

~ AWESOME
MARVELOUS
SPLENDID ~

Wonderful right 5/5

This was awesome Karla :) I love it!

How sweet it is

You know while reading this I could picture lovers in a web spinning their desire and lying within it the whole morning where the sun sparkles their romance. Very passionate..a lovely read!

Now wat to say abt dis poem..
Jus want to make a req plz, plz, plz, karla
Make your Mastery Contagious..
Coz we al want to write like u..

This is a really sensual poem, Karla!

5/5 Ingrid

You always die so elegantly but dying
has always been a part of our lives.

Great line, and as previously mentioned, the metaphors were really what pulled this together. Loved it! Well done.
Great music too.

Beautiful poem. The visuals amazing. Absolutely loved it! =)