Comments : The Call Came, He Was Dead

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    One thing lost, is another gained. When the wait is due, news changes. Keep fit, stay strong..

  • 11 years ago

    by Francisco

    This is great

  • 11 years ago

    by Mams

    This was really very sad to read.. Bt truly it was superb ...O:-)

  • 11 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    So sad a poem, dear! Good trees are cut down first...likewise, ur uncle...m sorry...
    Well penned!
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by xxOutcastQueenxx

    Sweetie that is a sad but amazing poem. I dont know how you can say you want to write more like me. This is exactly something I would write. So much feeling. So sad but beautiful.

  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Wow. this is very powerful. I love it . very good imagery I felt like I was there lol . Very deep. you described your feelings perfectly.

  • 11 years ago

    by Let It Be

    Acutally could this be called a prose poem? Really you are talented dont deny yourself that!

  • 11 years ago

    by Anthony Harder

    This is amazing, reading it made me sad, but it was so beautifully written. There was so much emotion and it was very descriptive, made me feel like they were my emotions.

  • 11 years ago

    by Da nomad

    Well manuscripted...good one.

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Awwww..this made me tear up...great write:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    So sorrowful but so powerful. The imaging is amazing and I feel though I were there. Keep penning

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    Wow, this poem is beyond anything I have ever read. it really hit hard for me. It is just so amazing to read and I could not stop!

    • 10 years ago

      by CathyButterflyJC

      Thank you to all of you, this poem sucked a lot out of me since I really write about death. THANK YOU SO MUCH, I MISS HIM VERY MUCH, YOUR COMMENTS MEAN A LOT!

  • 10 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    I can understand your pain. Be strong, THIS TOO WILL PASS.
    You are a perfect poet. you have a genuine talent. I liked the whole poem specially a line, "Like only beauty is from a flower what you notice."

    • 10 years ago

      by CathyButterflyJC

      He wasn't my Father, but he was my Uncle and something about him told me he understood me more then my family has or my friends, this site understands me and that's what is important

  • 10 years ago

    by sleepingwithsirensfanatic

    Wow!!! amazing by far your best... 10000/10000

  • 10 years ago

    by Maydee

    This poem is amazing and I can really relate to it. I lost my great uncle a couple years ago because he had a stroke, so now every year on the forth of July my family gets togeather to remember him. But it just goes to show you that life goes on and time helps heal some things like this.

  • 10 years ago

    by ayesha adnan

    I wish you a happy life you are really talentented keep it up

    yours,Ayesha

  • 10 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    Wow. This is such a chilling, painful piece. My condolences. Beautiful write though.

  • 10 years ago

    by jacob wylde

    Well written sweetheart

  • 10 years ago

    by jacob wylde

    Well written sweetheart

  • 10 years ago

    by Vic Johns

    A master-piece !