One night is all it took!

by Donnie   Dec 17, 2012


One night is all it took,
it was like a love story from a book.
We fell in love it was nothing but smiles,
the sound of your voice I could hear from miles.
All was well, never would have thought,
a great deal of love ended when I fought.
I held so much in by losing my dad,
never to talk, I drank instead.
I took every thing out on you,
the one true love I only knew.
Now I'm faced with not having you by my side,
I hate that every time you think of me the tears roll down your eyes.
I don't blame you from not wanting me in your sight. Cause all it took was that one night!

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  • 11 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    I agree with Amreen and suggest u to do the same!
    Over all, its a sad but good poem!

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Beautifully written.Sweet and charming:)
    I would suggest you to divide the piece accordingly as it rhymes:)
    Good work^^

    • 10 years ago

      by Donnie

      I think i did what you asked of me whit this poem? Does this look better?