Lovely piece!

Good piece,

This part over here sounded a bit rocky compare to the rest of the poem. It might just have been me thought.

I pretend that i dont love you, the way that you love me,

But my heart keeps trying to run to you, praying that your free.

Profound and passionate!
Keep writing(:

Hmmm.... let's see, I'm not sure. May be this might help

in this part where it says:

This is a friendship, and nothing more
Will i ever be able to say.

It might benefit if it is like this...

"This is a friendship and nothing more," will I ever be able to say?

Using the quotations like you are quoting what you wish to say.

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The next one, I think it will benefit if we take away the That... And the part about "your free" I think you meant you're free... Like this...

"I pretend I don't love you the way you love me
but my heart keeps trying to run to you, praying that you are free.

I think that might help with the little rocky feeling that I got. What do you think? Aside from that, I like this piece. It's good.