Comments : Before I knew you

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Chelsey this is beautiful. It reminds me of a song, forgot who sings it. But this was so heartfelt and hopeful that there is always someone for us.

    Awesome
    x

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Chels....

    First: I want to say this poem, is the heart of you and the beautiful woman you are... Its the love you have within and what you will give to another
    when he looks into your eyes at first meeting.. you will find him...

    I can't say enough about this piece.. its personal and direct from the heart... beautifully written...

  • 11 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    The ending made me go like

    "damn"....

  • 11 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Chelsey.. you've melted me with this poem.

    This poem to your future lover, your soul mate, is so beautiful it's tear worthy.

    " This smile
    was made to be handed to you. I won't ever forget this
    journey of looking for you, but when you finally read this

    realize, I loved you before I knew you. "

    This made the poem, I swear it did. I love this part the most.

    Great job hun! You'll find your soul mate one day, and when you do, it will be just like in this poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I love this and the meaning of it. The song it reminds me of is Savage Garden - I Knew I Loved You Before I Met You. Great song and you made a great poem.

    I love the hope and the longing and the determination that your heart will find this soul heart to connect with. It is a beautiful write and I could relate to this a lot. I really liked the idea of writing to someone we don't know yet but who we believe will be the ones we fall in love with.

    Great work x

  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah

    This is beautiful.. I read it 3 times!