Wow, I really really really liked this poem, there was meaning dancing on your letters, wonderful poem.

Rhyming is very good and meaning full, flow is also good but there is something missing so from me 4/5

It's very pretty but i agree with Love and Peace something is missing i can't put my finger down but still it's still a while to go 4/5

Queen Ash

Wow this wow i love it its amazing

This is a beautiful and sweet poem.
A few notes:
"Thru" should be "through" because the way you have it isn't a real word. It is essentially only used for things like... Drive-thru's.
In the second stanza, first like "steal" is capitalized. Why? Are we supposed to pay more attention to this one word? I think you can strengthen your poem in this way. It is very melodic, but after a while I was wondering if I had read the same line twice, when I hadn't. Bring emphasis to certain parts of your poem to avoid it.
But again, as I said, it is melodic. It has a very nice flow, and it feels sweet. Great job! C:

Wow I simply I like ur poem.

Wow I simply I like ur poem.

W0nderful. .wht a magical combination words wid love. .