Stay Strong

by Rachel   Jul 1, 2004


Stay Strong

I gotta keep it together.
Can't let it show.
gotta keep it together.
She wouldn't want me to let go.

I can't stop now.
I gotta pull through.
Can't stop now.
Because remember, I promised you

I have to be strong
Don't look back now
Have to be strong
I'll make it through somehow

I won't break now
I'll be happy everyday
Won't break now
But this girls got something to say

You messed up, you're human
Who would have guessed
Maybe you're not perfect,
I'll still love you none the less

For only I truly know
The person you are inside
But I would like to take this chance
To say my final goodbye

I gotta keep it together
I cant stop now
I have to be strong
I wont break now

please rate and comment on my poem i haven't been writing much and i appreciate your thoughts and criticism as i am getting back on my feet as a writer

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  • 19 years ago

    by juss an allycat

    hey hey rachael, that was a great pom and the repetitiveness added a huge amount of effect and made it catchier.
    check out som of my new poems if u can

    xxoo,
    alysse

  • 19 years ago

    by KELLiE SHEA

    Hey Rach. NICE poem i mena dude ur great and i kinda know whats going on u know..... hope its al right. i know *shes* always the one who helps u and.. i gotta be there for MY best friend right now cuz of that kinda of concept.. if ur confugled... just ask...n ill explain FEEL FREE! read some of me poems LatR bye

    *Kellie*