Dancing shadow

by The Po whet   Jan 14, 2013


She's the one I've been waiting on
all along,
her laughter is mesmerizing ;
hollow like that of a tickled bambino,
though she reaches out her heart
she's yet far from my grasp.
she's like a bright star
glittering in the night skies
and I a naive optimist
watching, waiting ...
impatiently
for it to fall willingly upon my palm
meanwhile I'll content with
chasing her dancing shadow.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Loved this one. Love can be so good when it happens at the right time of with the right person can't it?

    You captured how mesmerized you are upon finding this lady but a sense of insecurity I feel which is why you wait because you possibly feel she's out of your league.

    Great write, Em

    • 7 years ago

      by The Po whet

      Thank you Em for your comment once again always I appreciate seeing them.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hi, Moses

    I had to have a read of a piece by my newest club-mate, and I'm very pleased I did. This is a beautiful little love poem, worded elegantly and was a pleasure to read.
    It seems so often the brightest stars are the ones that allude us the most, metaphorically speaking.

    Take care and all the very best,
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by The Po whet

      Thank you for the comment and compliment Ben, I'm humbled .

  • 9 years ago

    by The Po whet

    Thanks lune, I much appreciate your comment

  • 9 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Another lovely write. I can relate to this and how love can really capture ones heart, mind, body and soul. You pieced it together so well is such a cute piece.

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