Ouch i feel for this girl!!! but overall the poem shows the way a girl with regret would see and it is beautiful the way you painted this poem it is truly an art of hope and then disappointment in the emotions! 5/5 very good my dear!

Queen Ash

I love how this flows. It is very beautiful. c: I can picture all of this in my mind and it is just amazing. Well done. 5/5 :3