This was beautifully written , the tittle made me think
Of the song by goo goo dolls

I loved the words used to craft such ellegency

Stunning :)

:O I didn't know you were still here! I miss you <3 and I've missed reading your work, though I could never really explain through a comment how I feel about it. This was amazing, dear.. the ending made me feel sad though.
Write more? Please :)

This is....... Oh god.

Beautiful!

[Weekly Contest Comment: 1/21/13]

How beautifully written this love poem was. It was extremely expressive with the poet's adjectives yet fascinating way to show the reader a bit of their thoughts. I was in wonder at the ending lines "I carry these words while she carries you", as if you love this person who is already with another, and you've never spoken the words but you know it to be true. I love the reality of your words, how they come alive with their own movement. I was longing for more to find out about this "you", it was mysterious. Uniquely crafted, I loved the precision in which you chose your words "the wind hiccups" and "afloat by sleeping tides". It is beautiful and makes me still ponder about if you are grieving this person or remembering them as they are now.