Oh nice I like it

Thanks:)

I'm not a big fan of sad/depressed poems but every now and then one catches my eye. And this one definitely caught my eye, it's great. :D

This is so relate-able; holding pain and secrets inside feeling like we have to keep it there. Pretending to be the person that everyone thinks you are in order to hide everything that's going on inside.

I have two little critiques:

"Screaming at me
To say them"

^^Did you mean to 'save' them instead of 'say'? My mind auto corrected it to save but I wasn't sure if that's what you meant or not.

The other things is that the comma's should be right after that word, then add the space. Example:

Oh ,I have so many secrets

^^ Oh, I have so many secrets

You also use To a lot, which isn't a bad thing but sometimes switching up the words a little can help spark new ideas. Just a thought for future references. :D

Overall, I really really like this poem. Keep writing (:

And the evils would be revealed

And thats all folks, now we know evil in raw form, it is a hard poem but I love it in a strange way, if you can say that about this kind of poems

XD

Smile of the day

I LOVE IT NUFF SAID O.O <3

Well written good poem!

WOW, this was an outstanding poem, a lot of a talent for writting put into this, great work

Incredible write! I really enjoyed this, your poems always leave me wanting to read more :) great job!