I know how that is. I love it. This poem means so much to me. I love it. Very good job beautiful

Such a sad poem of loss. the description of being by the grave is very clear and I can see you sitting there. It has a tone of coldness through out which is what is like by a grave. Then to hear the circumstances of the death is even more chilling and makes you wonder what went on in their life. I enjoyed the rhyme and flow also.

Well done on this.

Awh baby girl!!! :( i'm soo sorry that you are getting extemely good in sad poetry but in a way i'm glad for you can let go of the sadness in your heart just know i love ya daughter soo much and i will be here through whatever! 5/5

Queen Ash