Comments : May be my last night

  • 11 years ago

    by Shades of Gray

    Please, please, PLEASE don't!! I know life is hard, and it hurts a lot. But I don't want you to end it. Be strong, and make it through the night. Talk to the people who love you and tell them how you feel right now. I know they care! Let them help you through this. Please listen to me. I know you don't know me but I read your poems a lot and I want you to get through this. You can, even when it seems like you can't. Please...don't do it.
    ~Shades of Gray

  • 11 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    Dear god love please don't! I know it's hard but please, stay. I can't do this without you love! Think of the future. Please???????? I love you so so much. Please don't die!

  • 11 years ago

    by whoami

    Kelwin does me saying that you are an amazing person make you feel happy in anyway? Because you are. And in reality I would follow after you. Kelwin, you are so loved.

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    If you killed yourself would you be in a better place?
    Are you sure ?
    You may not know me, but that wont do, first off you wont be in a better place. Secondly did you think of those who loves you?
    Think about it :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Reyna

    Please don't, hold on, I know how bad it hurts but we all love you. It's not worth it bro. I know I've only been a cutter mg or a little while but I've been depressed for longer. It hurts so much. I almost ended it several times but its not worth it there's so many who care. You make us happy so if you go your writing your name on my list of dead friends. Hold on please, for the love of God, hold on.

  • 11 years ago

    by Roses Bleed

    A beautiful poem, but more than that, is the fact that it came from your heart. Whether you act on it or not does matter, and plenty of people would be devastated, but I find that writing out my emotions helps get a lot of it out. I say a lot and not all , because you are still going to want to do this, but I think that you love to many people back to really do it, too many girls would cry, and you seem like you wouldn't like that. 5/5 though darling, keep going :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    I agree with Wildflower, I have read a few of your pieces now and you have been through more than anybody deserves to, in one lifetime.
    You could use this in a positive way to help others.
    Think long and hard, you get one life only, do you really want to lose it, plus finish those friendships you have made.

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Dear Kelwin, you are a wonderful person and ending your life is a small thing friend. I am there for you friend when you need me and there are 1000 reasons to be happy. So choose one and be happy ya:)
    Keep smiling. It spreads a thousand miles!

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    There you go P&Q is by your side:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Kelwin.... we love you too. I seriously hope you wake up so I can give you a big hug and try to calm some fears.
    I know it s hard to lose people hun. Oh, I know. I just wish i had been here last night to help you :/
    I hope you wake and stick to that promise.
    You have a beautiful child on the way and people here who love you more than anything and would die to see you leave :/

    This poem is heartbreaking and yet, I understand where you come from.
    Just please wake up.

  • 11 years ago

    by Natasha

    This is your true heart content. But you made it this far now and also you turn it into a beautiful piece which is worth the read. It's very is lovely... :)