Tin Roof

by MyHalozChokinMe   Jan 28, 2013


I usually love the rain-

But, today, it sounds like
premeditated murder.

If I could just reach out to you
from this hemisphere, I'd fill
the space between my fingers
with yours...

But the quiet downpour of no
one continues to drown me.

And I always believed it would
be the tears that take me under.

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  • 11 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    @.@!!!

    How I love your metaphorical wording...

    I too usually love the rain...

    But its repetitive taping just reminds me of waiting to see the people I'm missing.

    Nicely worded missy,
    Great write <3

    P.s... Loved the Quote!!! 5/5

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