Angel Love ( senryu )

What another great dedication poem to your mother. She must be a very special person in your life. Ok I'll break down each line. Xx

My heart is healing- this is a very powerful line you have written here. That can say a lot. It's amazing that your heart is healing but there can be a lot you are healing from indeed. I do like how you leave the reader on edge here though. We all have to ask what from but only you will know that and the one's you love. The past is very difficult to overcome as I have always said but when you surround yourself with support and positive people it will get better. Even that one person whom ever it may be can help you and here you make it your mother probably fully true.

because of my mother's love- This is the supporting line and the height of the poem. This is what you were talking about the whole time. I agree with everyone else there is no love like a mother's love. I believe it takes so much strength to help someone cope and here you make your mother out to be a hero of your life. I love that. I think we all have that one person who we look up to and your mother is that one person. I think love is the key word here. It can be used to hurt and heal in my opinion. Obviously it's the healing part here. :).

which makes flowers grow- I actually loved the deeper meaning of this line. Flowers cannot grow without being taken care for and loved. Like a heart. Your heart. You are the flower here it seems and with your mother's love you will grow or your heart will grow or both. You will heal in time. This is a very sweet poem saffie. It brings to light how much one person or a family can come together in times of trial and help each other. :).

There is no remedy like a mothers love!
Great job :)

And I think you meant Senryu not Haiku since its not a piece about nature :)

Very beautiful and touching, Saffie.
Nothing can ever replace a mother's love.
<3

What is more comforting than a warm mothers heart, what a sweet and true poem is this:)
Great job Saffie!!