A loveble piece to me! I think it's better to replace the info in the title to be "String Senryus" instead of "a collection of haiku" because haiku is only related to poems about nature. The syllable counts for the 1st lines of first and third stanzas is only four for each (each should be five). This aside, I loved your work.

I love this and I enjoyed reading it. Just edit it, and it'll be perfect. Great job!!

The syllable count looks fine to me, so I assume you already edited it. :)

Memories of ones we love stay alive within us. Even the slightest smell can trigger frozen memories that we may have kept hoarded in our thoughts for years.

Overall, a wonderful string of senryu's!

This poem is adorable, I really love the tone you have create in this poem. I find this poem to be romantic, yet a bit sad. Love stays with us long after our partner leave, whether they have left due to uncontrollable circumstances or just fell out of love it's still a heartbreaking situation. I really wish I could pick a favorite stanza, but honestly I can't because I love the whole piece. I was totally grabbed in from beginning to the very end.

Beautiful...5/5

I love the free flow of this well written beautiful poem

There isn't a thing I didn't like. Well done

Beautiful poem I loved it

Sweet stringed senryus.