I like the flow and how it just rhymed but very beautiful and the metaphors are just stunning! :) love it! :) 5/5

Queen Ashlin

NIce flow, great poem too, just saw your online and a new user too so thought it give your poems a look and i was pleasantly surprised, im in the Navy to btw, all the best

Nice flow with great rhyming! Choosing species from animal kingdom made the poem so loveable to all ages to read. This poem also relates to the nature category. The title is superior as relating to the 1st and last stanzas with the spidor being the main actor. Another masterpiece.

The rythmn and rhyme flawless and I sense more depth than may reach the average reader. Well done

I really like your wordplay and the rhythm; it flows perfectly with your whimsical theme. This could easily make a really nice story because the imagery is vivid enough, where you don't need illustrations. Again, nice work.

The flow is perfect and good rhyming
amazing written 5/5.

A spider coming to a philosophical conclusion, it's unique to say the least! I really enjoyed this, it was easy to read yet held a lot more meaning than one may expect. I really like how you can turn simple things into thought provoking pieces while still keeping the approachable style! Fair play. [:

A spider coming to a philosophical conclusion, it's unique to say the least! I really enjoyed this, it was easy to read yet held a lot more meaning than one may expect. I really like how you can turn simple things into thought provoking pieces while still keeping the approachable style! Fair play. [: