Comments : Please i telling you the truth

  • 12 years ago

    by Kate

    Aww. This is adorable.
    I love rhyming poems and this has an amazing flow and the rhyme is good.
    I enjoyed reading about the trials and tribulations the entire relationship.
    Plus, the ending is so sweet.
    So, in all, it paints a bittersweet love.
    Nice one.

    • 12 years ago

      by brandi

      Thank you i don't write poems i just write how i feeling lol thank you

  • 12 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    OMGoodness I love this poem soooo mcuh, fanstastic job it really spoke to me, I loved the emotion, heart, and everything about it, 100/100!

    • 12 years ago

      by brandi

      Thank you so much i just wrote how i feel in you liked it this makes me wanna do more