Comments : No More Pain

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Definitely a dark poem and I like the hopeful twist at the end and the surprising strength the little girl has even though her father drops dead. Seems to be her own actions that do so. So it is an interesting twist
    Especially since you call her gentle and little.

    • 11 years ago

      by Dominique Lewis

      Thank you sis...I am just in a dark mood right now. I am only got an hour of sleep cause I kept having nightmares of my stepfather.

  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    OMG!!!!! wow i don't know what to say...i'm actually very speachless here daughter...the poem made me shiver...makes me hate the man and be glad in the poem he's dead...i'd agree with the little girl...wow...i don't know what to say... dang!! 5/5

    Queen Ashlin

    • 11 years ago

      by Dominique Lewis

      Thank you mother...I am really not that great today so yeah...