You know this can be used for children like a nursery rhyme and at the same time pass on a message on how one should live. I like the flow and the subtle message it holds. I also like how you referred to God as the invisible Space King otherwise it will become like a prayer, if that makes sense to you...nice write :)

Bwahahaha i thought this was kinda funny. Sorry if it wasnt meant that way. I enjoyed the read.

This is so cute!