Midnight Madness

by Gone Forever   Mar 1, 2013


Fresh fallen snow
covering the land.
Everything seems to glow
underneath the cool moon.

Too bad the snow is slowly turning
a deep shade of crimson,
all from a white that'd been burning
in the eyes of one man.

He crept and stalked her,
but so very sneakily.
Nobody even had a wonder
of what he was actually doing.

Slaughtered under the moon,
was this sweet little girl.
Murdered by the goon
who had murdered her mother.

She was so small
so fragile and kind.
Yet after her little "fall"
the daughter turned cold.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    Sad but well written.Keep writing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    Very well written, I really enjoyed this poem :) fantastic job!

  • 12 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    Slaughtered under the moon,
    was this sweet little girl.
    Murdered by the goon
    who had murdered her mother
    ^^^ that part gave me the shivers since if i ever have a daughter of my fleash and blood i would protect her... yeah that's just me lol but i really like this poem

  • 12 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Its unique. I like it alot! i like how all the lines worked beautifully together. dark , like i like it

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