Lost love (tyburn)

by Masked metaphor   Mar 12, 2013


Darkness
Loveless
Hopeless
Mindless
Wrapped in darkness of her loveless eyes
Hopeless and mindless staring back at mine.

Written by: masked metaphor

A six line poem consisting of 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables.

The first four lines rhyme and are all descriptive words. The last two lines rhyme and incorporate the first, second, third, and fourth lines as the 5th and 6th.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    I love this poem
    Great job!
    5.5 from me

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    You seem to really studied alot if forms , there always
    A pleasure to read , beautiful piece

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Andrew- I adore this form... very pretty piece... the flow and rhyme scheme is beautiful!!!