Comments : To try to prevent suicide my way

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Really deep hun. Gosh you have been through way too much. But this is amazing.

    So proud of you :)

  • 11 years ago

    by StupidMe

    Good poem: ) 4/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is really good!!!! I love it

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    BEAUTIFULly written Kelwin, I really loved reading this, it really spoke to out to many I know for sure! I still can't get enough of the way you write, it is beyond wonderful, outstnading, remarkable! Kelwin don't ever give up please, keep fighting, you were given a life, don't lose it! 100/100

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    You make some really strong points, I really did need to see this today. Good piece.