Wow, I really liked this poem, it really spoke out to me, wonderful job, this is a true inspiration, really screamed to all who have felt love or thought they did and who have been lied to or misused and trust defeated. I loved reading this poem and I love how well you brought in emotion, fantastic poem.
Awh i really love this poem it spoke to me and how i used to be... i thought that no one could love me as i was but then again i was used for beauty for personality but yet they never cared for the girl DEEP inside and after all that they kept breaking me apart this poem is like a part of my old self and this is a good poem with good flow and the tone of the poem is really sad mixed with a slash of hope that love might come and sweep you away Raven good job girl 5/5
6 years ago
This is amazing.. so breath taking even thou I know the story behind it