Comments : The Angered Tears

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Anger swells within my breast,
    I won't back down to him anymore,
    I will no longer be so depressed,
    He can slither along the icy floor,
    I hope he gets stepped on....
    ^^^^ this part made me go awh and laugh in truth i've never known someone to say i hope they turn into a snake and get stepped on lol i'm sorry and another thing i LOVE the end part of this poem it really is sweet i had that once but i walked away it's not who i will be or who i will ever WANT to be 5/5

    Queen Ashlin

    • 11 years ago

      by Dominique Lewis

      Thank you Mommy. :3 Oh and the meaning of "he can slither along the icy floor" means that he cant keep his d*** in his pants so Imma laugh when he gets it cut off :p

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Hahahahha guys won't like to let go of their privates heck they are very touchy about it lol but anyways this is very sweet daughter i like it

    • 11 years ago

      by Dominique Lewis

      Thank you. The message I sent you explains who it is about :p I wrote it a long long time ago.