Good poem Dreamofolwin!

Really heartfelt and emotional.
I liked it.

I have always wanted to write this form but somehow that didn't happen. You have written it so well :)
Loved the pause at the end... very expressive write.

Love it!.

I love writing love poems, and those alike, and you get 5 stars from me, so that means something haha.

So glad that you submitted it.
Very emotional...so much has been said with such little words.

Could relate to these lines so much that I felt being choked after reading it.....as always...you just wrote it from your heart.

No one sees how my heart craves...
Expressions, laughter, my sanity saved

all the best & take care

So glad that you submitted it.
Very emotional...so much has been said with such little words.

Could relate to these lines so much that I felt being choked after reading it.....as always...you just wrote it from your heart.

No one sees how my heart craves...
Expressions, laughter, my sanity saved

all the best & take care

So glad that you submitted it.
Very emotional...so much has been said with such little words.

Could relate to these lines so much that I felt being choked after reading it.....as always...you just wrote it from your heart.

No one sees how my heart craves...
Expressions, laughter, my sanity saved

all the best & take care

Longing for someone to understand...
One tender word, the touch of a hand;

^^This opening is enough to touch the heart..moving couplet.

No one sees how my heart craves...
Expressions, laughter, my sanity saved.

^^A very emotional line and believe me when I say that I know how you must be feeling because at one time I was in the same boat.

Loneliness is such an empty feeling to battle with and I hope it doesn't last. Take care.

Well done with this - getting an acrostic to rhyme seamlessly is not easy - you've achieved that here.
Take care,
Ben

Excellent write!

I really love your word choice and rhyming in an acrostic is not so easily done well, very thought provoking piece.

Great job :)

Olwin this is just beautiful. Acrobatics don't usually rhyme but you did yours flawlessly. Your words really touch the readers heart.
Excellent!
Take care
Love
Cindy

Hi Olwin,

Well done on such an amazingingly flawless acrostic. The rhythm goes throughout.

Loneliness can be very hard to deal with and even in a room full of people we can still feel lonely.

Take care, Em.