^ Strong imagery. The crescent part of the moon could be described as a strip.
smiling down at
life and artificial
glass lights illuminating
^ The radiance of the crescent strip is rendered insignificant before the glow of artificial light. Yet it never is soothing to the soul, for the beauty and the calmness is absent. Plus the moon is supposed to be an abode of a spirit.
if the blindfolds of ebony clouds
more blinding or lust of electronic bliss.
^ Oh! I love how you've used "electronic bliss" The irony is marvelous.